Caligula's Launderette

This really isn't a writing tip, but a resource. Several years ago tired of writing the same colors over and over again: (green, blue, yellow, black, white, or adding light ...

*sticks out tongue*

Hm, a jerky beginning, though I don't think you should get rid of the first line(s), just revise and tweak them a little. I suggest somesort of rewrite like this- ...

And sometimes you point out to other people what you think sucks and have their take on it. :D

Beautiful, hon. My one nitpicky thing is that beer doesn't seem to go with the rest of the diction; maybe mead would work better. she is just another grain of ...

Hey honey, Welcome to YWS, I go by Cal or CL around here. If you have any questions please feel free to PM me. Cheerios, CL

I love it, hon. Actually I think that line does make sense. Brava! How's that for being lame and nonconstructive? CL.

Well, so... I love you all, and thank you for your comments... *HUGS* Kerouac, know there is an interesting man, and even an interesting-er poet, and yes I know that's ...

I'm over there - simpletonsgrin

Welcome to YWS, hon. I go by CL or Cal around here, if you have any questions please feel free to PM me. See you around. Cheesemuffin? CL.

The House that Jack Kerouac Built full of anecdotes and real world mythologies tampered by the patois of the north, and poetry pages so far from filial, bloated with cognac, ...

Hahahaha, ZOMG we rule! You just made my day, no my week. :D Heehee, Easy Company makes me think of Curahee. I laughed really hard at the exchange between Xan ...

Infant For my Human Sexuality course I read “The Nature of Love” by Harry F. Harlow which I found to be a very interesting article. Harlow states “psychologists have failed[…]. ...

I love you Brad, but you already know that. The imagery is amazing, and the allusions and such make it that much richer. I think this has to be one ...

Like smaur said, everyone knows . Though I really just got into the swing of actually telling people I write. By the by, that little fact there - actually telling ...